onsdag 30 november 2011

Hide and seek

It was an afternoon and my parents would go out and eat dinner at a resturant. They could not leave me and my sister,so they called the babysitter Katie.

When we were waiting for the babysitter we tried to think out a plan how to get rid of her.

We heard the bell ringing and it was Katie and my parents were on their way. I didn´t like Katie. We had devised a plan that was perfect. We played hide and seek. My sister and me hid in place where she could not find us. We all made up a plan. Our plan was like this: We first took a rope and fastened it on the bookshelf,  then we took a chain that we would scrape on the door, for her to believe that there is a ghost that makes it. She shouted at us but we didn´t answer her. She was worried about us. We went to put the rope on the bookshelf and then the trail on the door and the lanter. We asked my friends if they could do the plan becuse if we do it
she will know that it is us, and then she will not be afraid. Jacob and Alex jumped in trough the window. Jacob would take care of the rope with the books, Alex with the chain and at the door. I felt  happy and that I was going to be free. The boys stood on their places and I would make a sign when it was time to scare her out. She shouted  last time and we went up.

OH MY GOD, where were you? said Katie. I did a sign for the boys and the light was extinguished. Katie was scared and started screaming. We laugh at her but she cried and the door began to rustle. the bookshelf fall. She could not find the door, but ran into a wall and fainted. the kids look at her face and was woried about her. She awoke and ask the kids what was going on.

We failed in our plan but next time we should think of something even scarier.

3 kommentarer:

  1. What kind of plan might that be next time? You text is easy to follow and it is possible to know what the plan is in this story. You have used words connected to the senses to create a scary feeling.

    SvaraRadera
  2. Jag har arbetat med den och gjort den läskig. Den blev väldigt kort. Jag har arbetat mot mitt mål.

    SvaraRadera
  3. Inträdesbiljett:
    Mål: Att använda samma tempus
    Vad jag behöver tänka på nästa gång: Att stava orden rätt

    SvaraRadera